Friday, January 18, 2008

The Forgotten World - Another Update

I've added another combat sequence, which means I had to start over on the once-over. And, of course, I sent the latest rev to my daughter for that all-important critical eye. I've started on the synopsis and have a first draft of a two-page version, but I still need a one-page version for those agents who, unlke Elminster, only want the short version. I thought I had a good pitch for the query letter, but now I'm not so sure. So, that will be my project for this weekend: finish the once-over, perfect the pitch, and condense the synopsis.

Shaun

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